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The Falcon and The Snowman by ~servistre:iconservistre:



Contant flowing streams
or stagnant waters

Triumphs trailblazer
or shortchange's slaughter

Altitude's ascension
or desecration's descension

Pyramids of prosperity
or perils of pestilence's punctuality

Rewards radient recipient
or river rapids raucous ravishing

Still shadows snowman
or fortitutudes forbearing falcon
©2006-2009 ~servistre
:iconservistre:

Author's Comments

I would expect that enough of the deviants reading the title of the poem wonder what kind of connection exists btween a falcon and a snowman. The poem's title has everything to do with the choice presented in the poem. The power of this poem lies in its contrasting. The falcon is represenative of those in society that strive to succeed by means of working hard & sacrifice while the snowman is represenative of those who desire to have success handed to them, with an example being the silver spoon scenario.

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:iconusedlotofhell:
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Don't start writting like that.

I hate reading poetry like this.
:iconsquirrel-lord:
interesting

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Whale Cancer- F' YEAH!!!
:iconusedlotofhell:
:)

Sorry for the rude/random comment, but one of my friends writes her stories and poetry like that and out of respect for her, I delete them.

I can't read them right for the life of me, and she knows it, so she really doesn't care...but....

As for a comment on the poem, before you ask.....It was confusing. I didn't understand what was going on, so ergo...:| I can't give it a comment.
:iconservistre:
ok, thanks anyway
:iconwacky-macky:
I second usedlotofhell to a lesser extent

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